I Am Writing A New Song Its A Humorous One

Tell me what you thing of these lyrics guys..


Steve wakes up with a zipper in his chest.
But you really wanna know what I love best
Ya see old Steve is a vegetarian he don't eat meat unless it's on his chin
He's gonna try and he's never gonna win

Chorus
He's got a pig valve in a vegetarian heart
It's the kinda thing that can tear a man apart
He's got a pig valve in a vegetarians heart


Now he's hating on me and I don't know why?
And when he talks to Rob he hangs his head and cries
But he can't give up no he's never gonna try.
And when he's gone nobodys gonna cry.

Repeat chorus

Now the days gonna come when he's gonna die
Cause that pig valve it's gonna die
And poor old Steve will have to hang his head and cry
Cause that pig valve is the only thing keeping you alive.

What do ya think? I got the guitar part done I recorded it last night. Now I have to lay down my vocal track. I am just messing with the words as I sing it to see if I can get better lyrics. Its a work in progress lol

 

Where can you host your own mp3? I got the one of the guitar tracks done. I still need to lay down the vocal tracks though. I have not had any quiet time yet. LOL but if I can post it up I will when I get it done..

 

Ya that would work now I just got to get it done.. The pressure is on lol :mpaddy:

 

This is my second parody song. Most of the other ones I wrote were built around relationships. Trying to break outta that and try something new and a little more upbeat. I play acoustic guitar and electric guitar. I would not call myself a player. Just a guy who likes to play. I always had songs buzzing around in my head so I thought I better learm how to play guitar. So I taught myself how and the rest is as they say history.