One thing that's getting tougher to appreciate is the terms used to describe body parts. After seeing the same word used ever so often, it loses it's appeal. Words like cock or shaft, should find some new terms such as "spear, or beacon of light"
. J/k But I really do think they need to try new words that don't always sound so in your face. Some creativity would be nice. Instead of "pussy", some authors say "sheath" yet the man's body party is never called the "sword or spear". Odd.
Yes, I have been reading too many of these, but let me put this questionable knowledge to use.
Here's a sample erotic passage.
She crawled on all fours towards the headboard, anxiously awaiting the feel of him against her thigh. She turned and looked into his eyes. He gives her one of those smiles which lightens up his gorgeous blue eyes. He follows her onto the sturdy bedding, kneeling behind her small, rounded buttocks. She mewls, as he reaches over to nuzzle her cheek with his, and moves to place small kisses along her neck and shoulders, sending shivers down her back. Feeling anxious at his nearness but not yet close enough to feel him inside, she feels a lolling ache between her legs. He sees the desire in her eyes, and wanting to feel her statuesque curves sheltered against his back, he reaches around to caress her soft, chocolate tipped cups, pulling her against his broad, muscular chest. Twisting one of her peach shaped nubs while circling and rubbing her labia with the other, intensifies her need, sending her into pre-orgasmic ecstasy. After a few minutes of rapt attention to her breast and nether lips, he pushes her down towards the bed, and positions his engorged tip at the entrance of her taut buttocks. He primes her with a slight nip at the apex of her anus, but decides to hold off. Readying her for his aching tip, he pushes inside with long, skillful fingers, eagerly massaging her anus with increasingly rapid insertions and frantic movements. Plunging repeatedly into an orifice untouched by another, his chest fills with pride as he watches her mouth open and head pulled back, lost in the pleasure of pistoning fingers pummeling her butt. Her body shivers at the sensations building inside, and a moan escapes in gulps as she pushes her apple shaped behind towards his engorged tip, waiting for his moist fingers to exit before another longer, hardened member fills her whole. Growing anxious at the intense pleasure building, she turns, catching a glimpse of sweat glistening his handsome face, his fingers poised to release her. They gaze at each other for what seems like a lifetime, before he poises his engorged tip by the entrance of her anus. She moves her butt slightly in small circles, teasing the tip of the hardened member. Impatient for the next phase, he grabs her hips and pulls her backward, rubbing his fingers along her thighs, reaching further around to stroke her breasts before moving back to grab her butt. He straightens and positions his tip at the entrance, then slowly pushes in, pausing briefly to give her a few moments to adjust to each slight push, knowing she would feel slight discomfort and pain at first. He pulls out slightly, then pushes in further, with a slightly harder thrust. He briefly pauses again, noticing her slight moans, knowing the pain would fade and pleasure would increase. She braces herself before he swiftly gives one harsh thrust inside, sliding inside completely, unable to stop a harsh grunt from the intense feelings her pulsing tightness evinces around his shaft. Starting with smaller thrusts, he begins moving in at a steady rhythm of thrusts, going slower or harder depending on her screams. Turning around to see him thrusting even harder, her cries intensify. Noticing the pained expression in her eyes, and moans escaping soft, full pink lips, he pulls out abruptly. She gasps, as if shocked by the sudden loss. Pleading with her eyes, for him to resume his continued assault on her eager ass, he presses the tip against her opening slightly, teasing her nether lips. Energized by her cooing from the intense euphoria, he surges in, eliciting a high pitched scream, which lowers with each withdrawal but rose with every heightened thrust. She turns again to see him watching her, lean muscle, and hard ass pummeling her with seemingly endless fervor. After an intense build up of quick thrusts, he begins to slow, sliding in and out coolly, gauging her moans as he slows his pace. As the last orgasm peters out, she lets out a final groan, as he pulls out completely. He reaches over to kiss her with tongues entwined in a sweet, moist caress before he pulls away. She smiles, and reaches in for another quick kiss on the lips. He slaps her butt and lets his cum stream across her svelt figure. She coos, wiping a few tears streaming down her face. She would only ever have this experience with him, the love of her life. Her husband was a gifted lover, and her honeymoon in bed with him, was the gift that just kept on giving.
