Btw, one of the *only* little things that stood out to me in your last post was "this phenomena." Phenomena = plural, so should be "these phenomena" or "this phenomenon." Silly I know, my weird brain just latched onto it.
I've given up proof reading as I can only do it for other people's writing. Thanks! I rely on it (*hush tossing and turning, can't sleep, "this phenomena," "this phenomena" ahhhh!)