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    On the line
    this monotonous force
    derisive and defined
    pushed down from the line
    broken to the core
    these burnt ribbons reflect
    what once was mine


    In the woods
    my outrage undone
    my feelers unbound
    I tell you
    lifeless is what you’ve become




    Among the trees
    wrapped so tight
    though they are forever claimed in life
    I, I begin to flicker and fade
    lost in life
    hating who you are
    unmounting the surmountable


    Tethered to their roots
    its a choice to remain
    and I am cold
    I am tired
    and I’m frightened to remain
    tormented by thoughts
    I lay in light
    that never fails to fade


    The dirt is damp
    and I shiver beneath my skin
    If bothered,
    If stricken,
    I break.


    Beneath the trees
    the light slips away
    and I become hazy
    increasing anxiety and pain
    this monotonous force
    consumed all I contained
    and wrapped so tight
    I no longer remain
    E
    If only in time
    Would stop for thine
    And let yourself be free
    To yield to what is drawn in there
    Deep down in your cavern affairs
    Give way what you want
    Your will to sing free


    If only you
    Could understand
    The way I want
    Your soul
    Our bodies in heat
    The way I want
    You and I to be entwined


    If only you
    Would understood
    That I see potential
    In that where you
    M
    Most of what I do in the day is write. I've posted a couple things on my blog here if you'd like to check them out. They're under the thread loudeater in the members blogs.
    M
    I read your poetry blog after seeing you had posted on my thread. Overall I think you have substantial natural talent already, but if I were you I would work on flow a little bit. Sometimes the flow can be disjointed in your longer, more free form pieces, but not because your ideas are disjointed, more so the actual words. Read lots, write lots, and be your harshest critic. I'm very excited to keep reading more of what you write!
    AhSver
    Thank you for the comment and the poem! I am glad that you feel inspired again.. I think poetry is like a flow, sometimes we get out of it and can't write and then it starts carrying us away. Hope to better places : ) I bookmarked your poetry blog and I will take time and read it tonight.
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